Pages

Friday, October 1, 2021

free writing

 Free Writing

Kia ora bloggers, on this blog I am posting about my writing. We get a photo and we try create a story with similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia, alliteration,  personification and idioms in ten minutes . Here's a story I  wrote with this picture:                                                                                                                                                                                                                A magnificent site

I’m Zoe and I just love anything science today I am over the moon, tonight is the aurora arboreal. Okey I am riding my bike to the perfect view, Mt cowles. I had the best time of my life so I went back home to get to bed. I woke up early   to  wright what I just witnessed, but as I pulled my curtains  I saw the aurora arboreal ......


   




By

5 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 1, 2021 at 10:23 AM

    Hi Evie,
    Maybe next time you should write a question and you misspelt picture,other wise it was a amazing blog post.

    ReplyDelete
  2. AnonymousOctober 1, 2021 at 10:23 AM

    Hi Evie,
    Maybe next time you should write a question and you misspelt picture, but otherwise it was an amazing story.

    ReplyDelete
  3. AnonymousOctober 1, 2021 at 10:26 AM

    Okey thanks for letting me know

    ReplyDelete
  4. AnonymousOctober 1, 2021 at 10:28 AM

    Hi Evie,
    Your writing is really good, next time add a question and maybe more of a reflection, like tell us if you like, dislike, find easy or hard doing this activity.

    ReplyDelete
  5. AnonymousOctober 1, 2021 at 10:37 AM

    Hi Evie
    your writing is really cool maybe next time you could add a question
    Bye!

    ReplyDelete

To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)